Twanda Sauceman
Friday, August 12, 2011
Good story start for my book?
Intriguing. I like it. One quick piece of advice: add a hint of action. It doesn't have to big like you could have Nick look behind and see a shadow of a man or something like that that keeps the reader super curious. Good beginning. :)
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